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[离任作者] 【女友喬琳】(二)【沐沐整理】

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【女友喬琳】(二)【沐沐整理】

                                        女友喬琳

作者:raillwolf
2009/02/10首發於:春滿四合院、SIS
     

 
            (二) 出游同房的尴尬处境

  一连9天的资讯展终于结束,因为这次的资讯展的企划有不错的成绩,郁宏
被张叔提升到副主任的位置,让郁宏高兴了一阵子。

  虽然那天在乔恩家不小心看到姿吟和张叔他们的奸情,但是郁宏心里认为每
个人都有自己的生活方式,作为外人不好去干涉,而且他也不认为这有什么大不
了的,何况张叔妻子过世那么久了,除却年纪,张叔长的也还算不错,又有钱,
找个年轻貌美的伴也没什么,除了对那有点交换夫妻性质的淫乱行为感到有点不
屑外,郁宏对他们并没有太大的反感。

  不知不觉的一年就要过去了,这段时间里郁宏完成了几件不大不小的案子,
虽然职位没有提升,但是丰厚的奖金让郁宏的荷包涨大了不少,趁着今年圣诞节
公司难得没有工作,郁宏决定请几天假带着乔琳出国去玩。

  当郁宏将她的计划告诉乔琳时,乔琳很是高兴了一阵子,接连推掉了几件案
子后,在出发的前几天告诉郁宏,因为姐夫建达到国外出差,乔琳怕姊姊一个人
在家寂寞,想带着姊姊一起。

  郁宏心里虽然不愿带着一个电灯泡,但是受不了乔琳的撒娇,最后还是同意
了,只是当郁宏好不容易帮乔恩订到机票后,却发现原先预订的旅馆已经没有房
间了,将这情形告知乔琳后,乔琳无所谓的说那就三人睡一间就好了,原本仅有
的两人独处时间也没有了,让郁宏小小的郁闷了一阵子。

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  到了雪梨,这几天,郁宏除了和乔琳姊妹俩,到著名的雪梨歌剧院和一些着
名景点玩了一阵子外,就是被拖着在各大百货广场逛街,回到旅馆后,郁宏累的
瘫在沙发上动也不想动,乔琳姊妹俩则坐在床上,分享这几天的收获,不停的变
换着今天刚买的衣服,让郁宏品评好不好看。

  过了一阵子,郁宏感到一阵热血上涌,要不是一旁有乔恩在场,恐怕郁宏已
经上去将乔琳推倒了。

  只见乔琳穿着一件淡紫色的薄纱睡衣,里面只穿着同系列的内裤,单薄的衣
料遮掩不住胸前嫣红的两点和下身的凄凄芳草。

  乔琳很满意郁宏的反应,朝着郁宏甜甜的一笑,迈着挑动的步伐缓缓的走向
郁宏,坐在郁宏的大腿上,郁宏下意识的搂住乔琳的纤腰,张嘴要向乔琳吻去,
感觉到郁宏下身的反应,乔琳用一只手指挡在郁宏的唇上,白了郁宏一眼,趴伏
在郁宏耳边轻声的嗔道:「坏人,姊姊还在呢。」

  郁宏顿时尴尬的坐直了身子,偷偷的看了一眼床上脸泛桃花的乔恩,乔恩不
好意思的随手拿了几件衣物,说了声:「我先去洗澡。」就狼狈的逃进浴室里,
「碰!」的一声关上门,靠在门上大口的喘气。

  乔琳看了看关上的浴室门,再看了看一脸尴尬的郁宏,突然吃吃的笑起来,
让郁宏感到郁闷。

  见郁宏脸色不善,乔琳连忙敛去笑容转过头去,但是颤动的双肩,还是泄漏
了她的想法,郁宏不禁恼羞成怒,一把扭过乔琳地俏脸,狠狠的吻在乔琳微翘的
樱唇上,一只手从睡衣的下摆伸入,握住乔琳饱满的乳房。

  乔琳小手轻推郁宏稍微反抗了一下,随即便搂着郁宏的头,张开小嘴和郁宏
纠缠在一起……

  浴室里的乔恩听到房间里的呻吟声,一只小手探进内裤,在阴核上轻轻的揉
动,一双和乔琳一样修长的美腿,忽夹忽松的不停变换着,另一只小手也不自觉
的在乳房上来回搓揉了起来。

  随着房间传来的呻吟越来越高昂激烈,乔恩在身上揉弄的速度也越来越快,
最后在乔琳一声高亢的尖叫声中,乔恩也一起达到了高潮。

  靠坐在浴室的门上,大口的喘着气,过了一会儿,乔恩缓过一口气来,走到
浴室的镜子前,看着自己高潮过后泛着潮红的脸,拍了拍秀气的脸颊,脱去身上
的衣物,看了一眼湿透了的内裤,想到自己刚才的举动,不觉感到脸红,以前自
己不是这样的,自从那次之后……乔恩不由得感觉自己越来越放荡了。

  洗漱完后,乔恩不敢直接开门出去,靠在门上听一会儿,没听到什么动静,
才扭动门把走了出去。

  走出门时,乔恩看到郁宏正忙着拉棉被盖住他和乔琳的下身,一瞬间,乔恩
仿佛看到郁宏半硬不软的鸡巴,还插在趴在他身上的乔琳的小屄里,乔恩心神一
荡,感觉到下身好像又有一阵湿润。

  郁宏尴尬的朝乔恩笑了一下,连忙转过头去,浑身无力的乔琳感觉到郁宏的
鸡巴又有回复生气的迹象,嘤咛一声,转过头瞟了郁宏一眼,才发觉乔恩已经洗
完早出来了。

  懒懒和乔恩打声招呼,乔琳知道郁宏的鸡巴为什么又恢复了生机,原来刚才
匆忙间,乔恩拿到了今天买的性感内衣进去洗澡,原本乔恩想让乔琳帮忙拿衣服
给她,但是喊了几声都没人回应,后来靠在门上又没有听到房间里有声音,以为
郁宏和乔琳办完事出去了,才大著胆子出来,没想到却看到郁宏俩人交叠床上休
息,一时间愣在那,不知所措,被郁红眼睛给占了便宜,直到乔琳轻呼了一声,
才回过神,连忙提着衣袋,又躲进浴室去。

  看见乔恩跑进浴室的姣好背影,乔琳低下头刚好看到郁宏斜眼偷瞄着乔恩消
失的背影,一副可惜的表情,和小屄里郁宏变得坚挺的鸡巴,恨恨的在郁宏的肩
膀上咬了一口,郁宏痛呼一声,看到乔琳一副吃醋的表情,忙讨好地笑了笑。

  看到郁宏一副尴尬讨好的样子,乔琳噗滋一笑,翻身离开郁宏的身上,小手
伸进被窝里,套弄着郁宏的鸡巴,轻声的在郁宏耳边诱惑着:「怎么样,姊姊的
身体好看吧。是不是也想操她啊,想的话要跟我说喔,我会不介意的,说不定我
还会帮你制造机会呢。」

  郁宏连忙摇头表示:「没有,没有,有这个如花似玉,善解人意的老婆我就
满足了,哪里还会想其他的女人。」

  乔琳似乎对郁宏的回答感到不太满意,套弄鸡巴的小手加了几分力道,「是
吗?可是刚才不知道是谁看到姊姊穿着睡衣的样子,鸡巴就变硬了的。」

  「咳,是吗?谁呀?我不知道耶。」

  郁宏还想装迷糊,但发觉到乔琳小手的力道又加了几分,连忙认错:「我错
了,老婆大人饶命啊,你再用力下去,就要断了,你也不想下半辈子就要守活寡
吧。」

  乔琳听了,呸了一声:「哼,断了就算了,大不了小姐再找别的男人。」

  但还是放开了郁宏的鸡巴,看见乔恩换了身衣服走出来,翻身下床拿了几件
衣服,往浴室走去,到了浴室门口,还回头充裕宏大声的说了声:「本小姐给你
个机会,我现在要去洗澡了,要洗很久的,你可要把握机会啊。」说完不理尴尬
的两人,笑着走进浴室,「碰!」的一声的关上门。

  乔恩和郁宏微微的互看了一眼,连忙转开视线,过了一会儿,受不了房间里
尴尬的气氛,轻轻的说了声:「我,我先去餐厅等你们。」说完,拿了件外套,
就跑出房间。

  郁宏摇了摇头,心想以后和乔恩单独相处时,就尴尬了。

  虽然郁宏不否认,对乔恩这样散发成熟韵味的年轻人妻也会有一些的遐想,
不过想到她是乔琳的姊姊,还是好朋友副连长阿达的老婆,郁宏不由自主的还是
感到排斥,在心里,郁宏认为自己算是比较传统的男人,不太可能做出那样出轨
的事。至于乔恩和张叔他们之间的淫乱关系,被郁宏下意识的选择了刻意遗忘。

  摇摇头散去自己的胡思乱想,郁宏穿上一件短裤,随手拿起了一旁的数位相
机,看这几天拍的相片。

  咦,这好像不是我的相机,可是怎么觉得好眼熟。郁宏心里疑惑着,突然乔
恩姣好的身影掠过脑海,郁宏想起了在哪看过这台相机……

                             (待续)



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I have not read the first chapter of this novel. But a first glance of the beginning paragraphs has immediately induced me to keep on reading because of the new and fresh style of writing which is quite different to the other novelists.

The plot of this story looks a bit simple. There are no very complicated and crooked developments in the story. The male character, like most of the male charcters in the adult stories, is fortunate enough to have the chance to occupy not only a very beautiful girl, but also  the chance to have sex contact with his girl friend's elder sister, who has already married to the male character's senior.

Even though the plot is simple, it has at least two special attractions. One is the setting of the story  at a foreign country, Sydney of Australia. The other setting is at the hotel's room with exciting descriptions of the interesting but horny sexual contacts of the character with two girls.

The characterization of the male character is not very detailly presented. Perhaps this is Chapter 2 of the story, all the necessary descriptions of the male character have already given in Chapter 1, so we do not know what exactly he looks like. If the writer has given all these in the first chapter with an introduction of the background of this character, then we will accept such a brief presentation. But if the writer has not done so, then we consider it is necessary for him to put more detailed descriptions of the charcter, for example, how does he exactly look like, how tall he is, why he is so attractive to girls, his face features, his strength and weakness etc.

He may miss the chance to introduce to the readers a description of the Opera House in Sydney. We presume the writer may have gone to Australia and have visited the Opera House. But we readers may have the interests to know what the world known Opera House really look like. It is a bit disappointed that the writer fails to do so.

As a matter of fact, such inadequate descriptions of place, characters and feelings, seem to be the weakness of the writer in writing this novel.

We are not given a clear picture of what the hotel really look like. Is it grand or just a motel ? Is it situated at the heart of Sydney or at the outskirt of the city. Nothing details have been given.

It is until the descriptions of the sex games taken place at the hotel's room that builds up the atmosphere and climax of this chapter.

Due to the difficulty in booking, the three characters are forced to stay in one room. Such an arrangement gives the writer to present a romantic yet horny taste of the story. Three persons in one single room? What will happen to them? How will the male character handle these two girls? What will the two girls do when they stay together with the single male? All these questions have aroused in intensive interests of the readers who are very eager to know the answer. It is such a setting of the story that makes this part of this chapter very readable.

In the room, the male character starts to have kisses with his girl, disregarding the existence of the girl's elder sister. This has aroused the sexual desire of the elder sister who excuses herself to take a bath in the bath room. But while these two young characters are making love on the bed, the elder sister is masterbating herself at the bath room. Then follows a possible 3P sex game. All the descriptions of the above events are very successfully presented that all the readers' sex imaginations have been built up with the the increasing sex atmosphere of the three characters. We may be jealous of the male character, though. Why is he so lucky to embrace two so wonderful girls? Why not me? How nice it will be if I am the man to enjoy these girls? All these are questions that the readers will ask. In this way, the writer has achieved his aim - to attract his readers.

We cannot name this story as an excellent novel, but we have to give credits to the writer's success in building up the sexual atmosphere and new settings to attract the readers.
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有熟人在旁,干起来总是显的尴尬,只是乔恩看来被张叔调教不久,还不是个真正的淫娃
一边听着实况一边自慰,还会脸红呢,虽说是女友姐姐,看见只穿性感内衣的样子仍有反应也代表男人果然是视觉的动物啊。
郁宏发现的问题,这个相机怎么这么象那天张叔拿着拍照的那部相机?不过相片一个型号号的太多了,只是会加大一点点疑惑罢啦!不过,会不会乔氏姐妹们很不小心的留了些照片在相机里呢?留下个疑问给下章啦!接下来相机里的内容肯定有爆点,加上女友推波助澜,也许郁宏很快就有机会干上乔恩,甚至是加入张叔一伙人的行列啊。
郁宏和乔恩应该不会只有这一点点事情呢?乔琳这样的逗郁宏?这章看起来,乔琳和乔恩还是内心比较放荡的啦!一点点就揭开了前面的故事,乔恩和乔琳究竟是怎么会和张叔搞到一起去的呢?这个帽子还要让郁宏带多久呢?
期待下文,感谢分享!
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