I have not read the first chapter of this novel. But a first glance of the beginning paragraphs has immediately induced me to keep on reading because of the new and fresh style of writing which is quite different to the other novelists.
The plot of this story looks a bit simple. There are no very complicated and crooked developments in the story. The male character, like most of the male charcters in the adult stories, is fortunate enough to have the chance to occupy not only a very beautiful girl, but also the chance to have sex contact with his girl friend's elder sister, who has already married to the male character's senior.
Even though the plot is simple, it has at least two special attractions. One is the setting of the story at a foreign country, Sydney of Australia. The other setting is at the hotel's room with exciting descriptions of the interesting but horny sexual contacts of the character with two girls.
The characterization of the male character is not very detailly presented. Perhaps this is Chapter 2 of the story, all the necessary descriptions of the male character have already given in Chapter 1, so we do not know what exactly he looks like. If the writer has given all these in the first chapter with an introduction of the background of this character, then we will accept such a brief presentation. But if the writer has not done so, then we consider it is necessary for him to put more detailed descriptions of the charcter, for example, how does he exactly look like, how tall he is, why he is so attractive to girls, his face features, his strength and weakness etc.
He may miss the chance to introduce to the readers a description of the Opera House in Sydney. We presume the writer may have gone to Australia and have visited the Opera House. But we readers may have the interests to know what the world known Opera House really look like. It is a bit disappointed that the writer fails to do so.
As a matter of fact, such inadequate descriptions of place, characters and feelings, seem to be the weakness of the writer in writing this novel.
We are not given a clear picture of what the hotel really look like. Is it grand or just a motel ? Is it situated at the heart of Sydney or at the outskirt of the city. Nothing details have been given.
It is until the descriptions of the sex games taken place at the hotel's room that builds up the atmosphere and climax of this chapter.
Due to the difficulty in booking, the three characters are forced to stay in one room. Such an arrangement gives the writer to present a romantic yet horny taste of the story. Three persons in one single room? What will happen to them? How will the male character handle these two girls? What will the two girls do when they stay together with the single male? All these questions have aroused in intensive interests of the readers who are very eager to know the answer. It is such a setting of the story that makes this part of this chapter very readable.
In the room, the male character starts to have kisses with his girl, disregarding the existence of the girl's elder sister. This has aroused the sexual desire of the elder sister who excuses herself to take a bath in the bath room. But while these two young characters are making love on the bed, the elder sister is masterbating herself at the bath room. Then follows a possible 3P sex game. All the descriptions of the above events are very successfully presented that all the readers' sex imaginations have been built up with the the increasing sex atmosphere of the three characters. We may be jealous of the male character, though. Why is he so lucky to embrace two so wonderful girls? Why not me? How nice it will be if I am the man to enjoy these girls? All these are questions that the readers will ask. In this way, the writer has achieved his aim - to attract his readers.
We cannot name this story as an excellent novel, but we have to give credits to the writer's success in building up the sexual atmosphere and new settings to attract the readers.
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